Proofing Power Minutes
May 15, 2021
In my hometown, the florist shop was owned by the Plant family. From then on, aptronyms (names that are surprisingly appropriate to careers) fascinated me, and I began keeping a list. Do you have any favorite aptronyms? Be sure to share them with me.
Here is a sampling of my list of aptronyms. Emily Moynihan has also added some from her collection.
Forrest Hammond, Fish and Wildlife
William B. Lawliss former dean of Notre Dame Law School
Tim Lawliss, Vermont Family Court judge
Dr. Michael Beach, Centers for Disease Control, Deadly
Amoeba in Lakes and on Beaches
Paul Rainwater, Interim Executive Director, Sewage and
Water Board in New Orleans
Holly Daisey, florist in Vermont
Tiffany, clerk at Rockingham Electric in New Hampshire
From Emily Moynihan:
John Marshall Sound, producer of audio books
Lucy Baker, author of The Boozy Baker
Nancy Baggett, author of Kneadlessly Simple
(a bread-baking book)
America Sews with Sue Hausmann
Burt Wolf, What We Eat
Glass with Vicki Payne
DK McCool, “Measurement of Frost Depth”
John Oakes Tree Service
April 15, 2021
Adjectives vs. Adverbs: Proofread the sentences below and make the correct word choices.
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February 15, 2021
Adjectives vs. Adverbs: Proofread the sentence below and make the correct word choice.
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January 15, 2022
We can create concise sentences by eliminating or replacing unnecessary phrases.
What simple words can replace each phrase below?
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November 15, 2021
When I heard these statements on television,
I was momentarily confused by a surprising timeline.
To avoid confusing your readers, you must avoid misplacing
your modifiers.
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September 15, 2021
How do you think people are feeling about going out to dinner during a pandemic?
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July 15, 2021
The question of writing use to versus used to comes up a lot.
Give these sentences a try.
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June 15, 2021
I often hear people make the grammar error in the sentence below.
Can you find the error, and do you understand why it’s wrong?
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May 15, 2021
Do you confuse further with farther? Everyone seems to be confused lately.
These are all actual sentences that I’ve heard recently.
Let’s practice by selecting the correct word in the parentheses.
Hint: (1) Farther refers to physical distance.
(2) Further is figurative. It means to a greater degree or in addition.
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April 15, 2021
Choosing to use the word historic vs. historical can be confusing.
And then, do you use a or an before them? Try out this
Power Minute by selecting the correct word in the parentheses.
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February 15, 2021
Something isn’t right in the following sentence.
The sentence isn’t saying what you may think it is. How would you edit it?
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January 15, 2021
Frequently used wordy constructions include the phrase to be able.
How would you edit the following sentences to eliminate this wordy phrase
that I heard repeatedly on a podcast? You may want to edit more;
but in this exercise, we are focusing on to be able.
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November 15, 2020
Do we capitalize company, college, or university when
referring to a specific institution while dropping its proper name?
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August 15, 2020
Acronyms and initialisms have you baffled? Here’s an explanation. Next time, we’ll troubleshoot their editing issues.
Acronyms are terms based on initial letters of their various elements and read as single words:
NASA (National Aeronautics and Space Administration)
AIDS (Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome)
NOAA (National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration)
Initialisms are terms read as a series of letters.
FDA (Food and Drug Administration)
RNC (Republican National Committee)
DNC (Democratic National Committee)
NBA (National Basketball Association)
You’ll find variations to these definitions:
Not an initial letter but a sound: XML (extensible markup language)
Use of a number: W3C (World Wide Web Consortium)
Combined: JPEG (Joint Picture Expert Group)
July 15, 2020
Oregon State University’s School of Writing, Literature, and Film is answering your questions about literary terms—on YouTube!
With humor and well-crafted examples in more than two dozen YouTube videos, OSU writing teachers share their take on a wide range of literary terms including hyperbole, metaphor, and enjambment.
Check out the “Oregon State Guide to Literary Terms” at bit.ly/OSUliteraryterms.
June 1, 2020
As we follow social-distancing orders throughout the country, many of us are learning to work, to school our children, or to file for benefits from home. We must understand instructions to use new tools in completing our tasks.
I've noticed how difficult it is to complete instructions that are poorly written. Are you writing instructions that guarantee your readers’ success? Let’s review how to write easy-to-understand instructions.
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Consider what your reader knows about the process. Don’t assume that they know more than they do.
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Be complete. Don’t leave out any steps.
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Number or bullet each step of your instructions.
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Describe only one step in each item.
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Be complete and accurate. If you say to click on “File Weekly Claim” on the main page, make sure that it’s on the main page.
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Ask someone unfamiliar with the instructions and the process to test your instructions.
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Once you publish your instructions online, proofread and edit once more to ensure that your instructions translated to the online platform correctly.
May 15, 2020
We can communicate our message more effectively by streamlining our writing.
How would you edit the following sentence?
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April 15, 2020
Agree the subject with the verb.
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March 15, 2020
Our readers rely on our choosing correct words.
Which word would you choose below?
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February 15, 2020
In our February 1 Punctuation Power Minute, we discussed
an issue with possessives. Here is a similar issue on joint ownership.
Do you see anything wrong?
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January 15, 2020
Proofread the sentence below.
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December 15, 2019
Do you use sarcastic interrogatives?
A sarcastic interrogative is an echo question: you answer a question with a question. You lead someone to an answer without giving them your answer. Sometimes sarcastic interrogatives are used as quick and witty retorts intersecting sarcasm. Here are a few popular examples:
Is the pope Catholic?
Does a duck swim?
Does a one-legged duck swim in circles?
Does Betty like butter?
Is a pig pork?
Some can be used to elicit deeper meanings. When answering a question on the views of Pope Francis, one author asked, “Is the pope still Catholic?”
November 15, 2019
Proofread the sentence below.
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July 15, 2019
Does this sports commentator’s piece on Tiger Woods need edits?
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April 15, 2019
Edit the following sentence; be concise.
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March 15, 2019
Do you notice anything awry in the following sentence?
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February 15, 2019
Consider a word usage issue below.
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January 15, 2019
Consider the word choice below.
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December 15, 2018
Lots to consider below. What simple changes would you make?
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September 15, 2018
Cut the fat!
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August 15, 2018
Do you see a problem with the sentence below?
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July 15, 2018
Do you see a problem with the sentence below?
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June 15, 2018
Proofread the sentence below. How would you change it?
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May 15, 2018
Proofread the quote below. How would you change it?
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April 15, 2018
Proofread this sentence for a word choice error. How would you change it?
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March 15, 2018
I’m on a roll with past participles; and since I’m a swimmer, we must discuss swim.
Choose the correct past participle of the verb swim.
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February 15, 2018
Choose the correct past participle of the verb prove.
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January 15, 2018
Choose the correct past participle of the verb drag.
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November 15, 2017
Would you change anything in the sentence below?
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October 15, 2017
I thought that this was going to be a simple Power Minute, but research has proven otherwise.
Which preposition do you think is correct?
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September 15, 2017
Here’s a sentence from an article about uncounted ballots. Anything wrong with the grammar?
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July 15, 2017
Is there something wrong with the sentence below?
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June 15, 2017
Ensure, assure, insure—confusing.
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May 15, 2017
Proofread carefully. Would you make any changes?
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April 15, 2017
Here is a great discussion on “Is it ‘I couldn’t care less’ or ‘I could care less’?”
Remember that Merriam-Webster’s videos are another great resource
for your editing questions. Follow this link for a useful discussion on this topic:
https://www.merriam-webster.com/video/could-care-less-or-couldnt-care-less
March 15, 2017
Proofread carefully. Would you make any changes?
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February 15, 2017
Here is a frequent spoken error. Don’t make the same mistake in writing.
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January 15, 2017
Edit this musician’s reflections.
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December 15, 2016
Edit this sentence.
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November 15, 2016
How would you answer a reader’s question: “Which verb do I choose?”
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October 15, 2016
Something is wrong.
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September 15, 2016
Which is it?
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August 15, 2016
Which is it?
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July 15, 2016
Something seems wrong to me with this church bulletin notice.
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June 15, 2016
Notice anything not quite right?
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April 15, 2016
Proofread carefully. Would you make any changes?
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March 15, 2016
Proofread carefully. Would you make any changes?
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February 15, 2016
Proofread carefully. Would you make any changes?
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January 15, 2016
How many people will be hired?
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September 15, 2015
Do you see something to edit below?
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July 15, 2015
Is there something amiss in this auto dealership’s radio advertisement?
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May 15, 2015
Who? Whoever? Who you gonna call for help?
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April 15, 2015
Edit this introductory statement from a letter.
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March 15, 2015
In January, we discussed capitalization. So, do you think the following statement
uses
proper capitalization?
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February 15, 2015
Listen to A Way with Words, NPR’s show about language. Ever want to know the origins of a word or a common phrase? This is the place!
Download podcasts for your commute to work. Enjoy!
http://www.waywordradio.org/
I thought only my family talked about traveling “half way around Wake Robin’s Barn.” I learned the source of that phrase, and it doesn’t refer to the barn on Wake Robin Road in my hometown.
January 15, 2015
Edit this announcement.
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December 15, 2014
Is something not quite right with this warning from a pharmaceutical company?
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November 15, 2014
Proofread the sentence below.
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October 15, 2014
On a positive note . . . How would you change this negative introduction to a positive announcement?
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September 15, 2014
How would you edit the sentence below?
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August 15, 2014
Don't strike out on the sentence below. You can find the error!
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July 15, 2014
Proofread this sentence.
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